Early Autumn
Path strewn with green leaves,
our shadows fall ahead on dappled way;
the wood at peace now.
our shadows fall ahead on dappled way;
the wood at peace now.
Another attempt at haiku. It follows the classical model for haiku in English in having the 5-10-5 syllabic structure; and it leaves the reader to fill in what is left unsaid. So – a slight improvement on the last one.
Another attempt at haiku. It follows the classical model for haiku in English in having the 5-10-5 syllabic structure; and it leaves the reader to fill in what is left unsaid. So – a slight improvement on the last one.